What a gorgeous and novel concept! All of your art is very original and lovely, but this takes the cake. Although the pieces are much larger than the staff, the feeling of sheet music still remains, with a three-dimensional brushwork feel. Nothing appears too bunched together or out of place, and the who thing is very pleasing to look at. There are small imperfections in the image itself - faint lines on the left that are a result of a lens imperfection, most likely, and would only be a major problem at higher resolutions - but the actual concept is lovely. This needs to be made into a print - preferably with a black watermark, placed flushed with the bottom of the image.
YES!!!! Excellent! That looks so much better now. The focus is a lot better and the lines are correct now. The only other suggestion I have for you is to put this on one of the stock sites where people buy the rights to use it. You should be able to make a lot of money with this photo like that. I can see this photo being used for all kinds of things from text books to websites backgrounds. I think you have a great opportunity to make some money here, if that is what you would like to do. All that aside, PERFECT photo.
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